Writing is an art used to convey your thoughts and emotions towards a particular topic. You need to start adding more about the characters feelings to your short stories. In your story The Birthmark, there isn't much detail about what the characters are feeling in the story. It is mostly just about the actions that are happening. Alymer discovers the birthmark and wants it to be removed and then when he removes it but kills her in the end there isn't much about his regret for accidentally killing his wife. People's interests are captivated when the author writes about the characters feelings.
Sincerely,
Edgar Allan Poe
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